Monday, March 12, 2012

Courage?

Courage is not what you born with. You need to develop throughout life time.
The people who got STDs are mostly being avoided by other people in public places.
So they will have less courage OR non at all. But there'll be a place for them to make them feel better and experiences the courage.


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  1. Eye's StyleApril 16, 2012 at 6:04 PM

    I do agree that courage is something that is developed throughout your whole life time. The example of people who has STDs helps explain why some people have less courage than other. However the post could have been further elaborated to better explain and give reasons why courage is developed throughout your lifetime. Also there are some grammar mistakes and fragments in the post.

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    1. James Rittichart ThompsonApril 16, 2012 at 6:33 PM

      I understand what your saying and I agree with most of it but next time you should use a different example instead of STDs.

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